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Deidara
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PostSubject: Exigo   Fri Jul 16, 2010 4:23 pm

Name: exigo

Age: 218

Race: Demon

Appearance:


Personality: Determined, willing to fight to the death, a good person in heart though he may come off rude.

History: Joined the war after his Brother did, He watched his brother get killed by a human and hasn't felt the same since. He had a rough childhood and hasnt been around people for a while. He left to wander around after his brother died and hasnt fought for either side since, He is rogue now.

To this day, however, it seems he still watches as things change in the war. He doesn't know much of what has been happening, such as what happens in the castles or in each world. He now merely wonders, ignoring everyone that seemed to go by.

Weapon of choice: He uses a scythe.

RP Sample: He walked silently as he kept his weapon latched on his back. Softly he stepped over the path that he walked on, keeping his thoughts and ideas to himself as usual. Finally, he came to a flowing stream and knealed by it to get a drink. He rested there for the remainder of the night.

Special Powers: He can run faster than most,

Likes: He likes being rogue, Apples, fighting, winning

Dislikes: Losing, being completely alone, humans, pain

Stats:

STR-100

Int-150

SPD- 250
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Agito
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Location: Between a Rock, and a pillow =w=

PostSubject: Re: Exigo   Fri Jul 16, 2010 4:27 pm

Please read what the Template says. Two Paragraphs for History. and please explain how he is "an overall good person." please and thank you. and RP sample is to SHOW not tell. and also... if you look at our other demons... your character seems a bit... young.... hell in demon world 18 is most likely still a baby... or a toddler. O.o
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PostSubject: Re: Exigo   Fri Jul 16, 2010 5:10 pm

yea i realized this >.<'
working on it
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PostSubject: Re: Exigo   Fri Jul 16, 2010 5:11 pm

it's alright. Approved!
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